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mindbender
06-18-2007, 03:51 AM
I awoke from a dream to find that my lurid fantasy had capsized me. In the quaking aftermath of a torrid unfolding of ecstasy, my body succumbed to pleasure by reeling itself nearly halfway off the mangled bed, and there I lie in a pool of sweat beneath the linens, breathing heavily. As I slowly regained focus, a gentle hand brushed against the back of my neck causing my heart to race. Only then did I realize I wasn’t dreaming; this was really happening. As I turned over to face my lover, bearing my breasts to him, I caught my reflection in his eyes. I was glowing with contentment, and I imagine he was basking in the his own prowess, that same magnificence that had brought me to very the edge of reality and back. He didn't say a word, just looked at me and smiled affectionately, knowingly.

Nothing could be more natural. I beckoned him closer and received his kiss upon my lips. I opened my mouth just slightly for his tongue to penetrate them. Panting softly into his mouth, I gently massaged his tongue with mine and slowly pulled away, kissing his lips, then his cheek, then his neck, and as I did so I let my hands explore his body, running my fingers over his chest and abdomen, feeling his muscles relax and respond to my slightest touch, kissing him over and over wherever my mouth would fall. His lips against mine once more, I pulled myself over him as our tongues danced together in anticipation. Our kiss fell and I smiled at him seductively, lowering my head to his chest and purring at the touch of his masculine body next to mine. I kissed him again and again, working myself over him, touching him lovingly like a sculptor enjoys the feel of fresh clay beneath her hands. Oh, and he was a work of art in my eyes. Lower and lower I brought my attention, and as I neared his manhood I grinned; he was ready for me, but he wouldn't have me, not yet. I eagerly kissed his penis and it took into my mouth. Hearing him moan as I engulfed him sent shivers of arousal up my spine. He noticed and brought his hand to my nether regions accordingly. I almost jumped in an explosion of excitement; it felt so good to feel his touch. As he fingered me, I played with the tip of his cock in my mouth, gently sucking and rolling my tongue across it. He gasped the moment I took him into my throat and continued to pleasure him.

When I sensed he was near climax, I stopped. My pussy was drenched in my juices and ached to take him again. He stared at me as I him shot him a cool look. He sighed in near disappointment, but then I positioned myself over him and gave him another peck on the mouth and a mischievous grin that could make any man's heart stop. I held his penis in my hand and let it plunge into my sopping wet vagina, his hard, pulsating cock causing my pussy lips to envelop him. It felt so incredible that I had to stop and take in the feeling for a moment before I could proceed. My look of satisfaction pleasing him, I began rocking my hips over his rock hard body, holding myself over him with my supple breasts conveniently within his reach. He took them in his hands and sucked my nipples and as I glided over him, moaning with pleasure, the intensity mounting moment by moment. Nearing exhaustion, I reveled in his delight, tightening my pussy around him as my clit rubbed against his body, giving me shivers as he caressed me with his tongue.

At last, as my body was about to tire, he moved me aside and pushed himself onto me, thrusting himself as he eagerly kissed my lips to calm my quivering body. I knew I would not be able to take it much longer. He impaled with his cock harder and faster as I wrapped my legs around him, greedily pushing him deeper into me. At last I could take no more, and my body quaked in orgasm, causing him to cum shortly after, his body falling onto mine, groaning deeply. I closed my eyes as our bodies melted together in perfect bliss. I smiled knowing this could go on all night.

inland wave
06-18-2007, 04:48 AM
what book are you reading anyway?

mindbender
06-18-2007, 05:05 AM
Haha, I am reading something else entirely. That story just is something that popped into my head and I decided to write for fun. It's not that good, rather lazily written. I got horny.

Maybe I'll add some more to it later and work in some bits of dialog. I am imagining a certain scenario for this couple right now.

Artemis Entreri
06-18-2007, 09:52 PM
Hmm, speaking of dirty writing, have you ever read The Sleeping Beauty Trilogy by A. N. Roquelaure (the pseudonym of a well known writer of vampire novels)?
They're heavy in BDSM and based loosely on the Sleeping Beauty fairy tale.

Shelli
06-18-2007, 10:07 PM
Yep, I read 'em a few years ago. :playboy:

quiet bear
06-19-2007, 03:55 AM
Funny there should be a thread about this. I've been writing a story for a few weeks now. Not a racy one, though.

Adora
06-22-2007, 09:17 AM
Hmm, speaking of dirty writing, have you ever read The Sleeping Beauty Trilogy by A. N. Roquelaure (the pseudonym of a well known writer of vampire novels)?
They're heavy in BDSM and based loosely on the Sleeping Beauty fairy tale.
Oh memories. I was 11 years old and that was pretty much my proper sexual awakening year. Exit to Eden was better. And so was Armand but that was one of her vamp stories and not "erotica" outright, though it may as well have been. Anne Rice might suck at everything else, but she writes some damn good porn.

Artemis Entreri
06-22-2007, 05:29 PM
I agree Exit to Eden was better.
Except that made that damn movie, if you haven't seen it, don't.
It has Rosie in a dominatrix outfit.

Rice also wrote a book as Anne Rampling called "Belinda" which is about love between 16yr old runaway and a 44 yr old artist. I don't remember the book being as sexually explicit as Eden but the subject is quite taboo.

mindbender
06-22-2007, 08:52 PM
I have another, longer story on Literotica if anyone wants to check it out:
An Orgasmic Encounter - Erotic Couplings - Literotica.com (http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=227794)

Also, if anyone else has stories, feel free to post. :)

Adora
06-23-2007, 04:04 AM
Er, I've done fanfiction pr0n drabbles for a meme but I don't think they're worth posting. There's far better writers out there in LJ land that get their readers hot and bothered.

mindbender
06-23-2007, 05:50 AM
Well, I say, who cares if you do not write like an award-winning novelist? Few people do. If you write, why not share it so we can offer constructive criticism? I'd appreciate the same. It's not all about how many rave reviews you get. It's the simple process of writing and sharing. The piece I posted above may was a 30 minute or so exercise and that's all I would expect from anyone else. The link I posted to Literotica contains a story that took several hours to finish. It's longer and more developed - it won't win me a Pulitzer or whatever the equivalent is for erotic fiction, but I'm more or less satisfied with it.

Adora
06-23-2007, 07:58 AM
Because I don't want "constructive criticism" from people I am not writing said fanfiction for, and I usually don't want constructive criticism anyway. That's the thing about fandom. When it's not for you, it's not for you. And it's not a self-improvement or writing class either, though some people sometimes like to pretend it is.

It's there for squee, and pr0n, and the occasional squee-inducing pr0n-for-charity drive. *goes back contentedly to her RPS* :showerlv:

mindbender
06-23-2007, 09:47 AM
Alrighty then. That's fine. I just did not want you to think you couldn't show what you've written for fear of it being ridiculed or whatnot. I know it at least that is something I wouldn't do.

I personally just like to write for the fun of it, and I like feedback because it gives me something to think about. For example, I shared some other writings (poems, not adult-themed) on a different forum and a person criticized me for doing more telling than describing - and he was right.

Adora
06-23-2007, 10:27 AM
That's fine. I just did not want you to think you couldn't show what you've written for fear of it being ridiculed or whatnot.
Well, there's that too. Which is where the "it's not for you" part comes from, especially with stuff like RPS which has tenuous acceptance even within fandom pr0n circles.