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Crumb
09-26-2007, 04:14 PM
I believe the rhythm is off on some of these, but their authors assure me that they are fine. If you don't think they qualify as a limerick, don't vote for them. :D May the best limerick win!

I

there once was a king who would marry
to see how much weight he could carry
first to his bed
then off with her head!
living with henry was scary!

II

There once was a land with no name,
Until Eric the Red showed his mane.
His men stepped ashore,
The land they adored,
And Greenland an ice land became.

III

In 79 AD at Naples Bay
Vesuvius explodes above Pompeii
The fury of Zeus
His molten noose
Encircles like statues his living prey

IV

When told that the poor had no bread,
And, starving, would all soon be dead,
Marie Antoinette spake,
“Why, then, let them eat cake!”
A folly that cost her her head.

V

The Vandals, persuaded by Arius,
Were in quite the position precarious.
They holed up in Carthage
But kickage of arseage
Came courtesy of Belisarius.

VI

On a midnight in Boston so clear
A bulwark ‘gainst patriot fear
He called, his horse running,
“The British are coming!”
The famed ride of Paul Revere

VII

John Scopes was a teacher quite bold,
Whose lessons he fought to have told.
When he took it to trial,
The result was quite vile,
For the earth is just 6K years old!

VIII

When Wall Street fell, panic befell the nation
Many lost their savings, so did their relation
When the stocks and bonds dropped
It just couldn't be stopped
Triggering the greatest depression since Creation

IX

In fleeing monarchical power
A Puritan lass earned a glower.
Her virtue was doubted
When rashly she shouted
“I came across, on the Mayflower!”

X

There once was a madman named Vlad
Whose vengeance would start a new fad.
He kept stakes by his side
Which their heads would soon ride
Should they make The Impaler too mad.

XI

It's said that Moses wrote it in the flesh,
How Yahweh wanted to start afresh.
But the story was stale,
Ripped off from a tale
A subplot from the Epic of Gilgamesh.

XII

A long time ago, way back when
Before Mark Twain wrote of Huck Finn
Honest Abe was a hit
After logs he did split
T'was elected President by the hair of his chin

XIII

There once was a man who was Serb
Some say he was also disturbed
But whether a kook or a spook
He murdered the duke
And left all of Europe perturbed

XIV

There once were two brothers named Wright
who perfected fixed-wing air flight.
Now after much advance
we wait for our chance
to fall from a ponderous height.

XV

The Young Pretender cried 'War!"
His Royal House of Stuart, to restore
upon Culloden's wild moors
what the Jacobites endured
as the English showed Charlie the door.

XVI

Pat Henry, a hero of note.
Or so the historians wrote.
But the problem remains,
That his wife, bound in chains,
Was prob'ly the source of that quote.

XVII

Let us sing of the great Paul Revere
Who rode out in the cool midnight clear.
He had everyone humming
"The British are coming!"
And at last, you damn yankees, we're here!

livius drusus
09-26-2007, 04:36 PM
Wow, what an impressive collection. :clap:

maddog
09-26-2007, 04:48 PM
those are fun!

I voted ...

#1286

Crumb
09-26-2007, 04:58 PM
Really there are almost too many. :stunned:

SharonDee
09-26-2007, 07:15 PM
:tldr:

(Kidding! I'll vote when I have time after work.)

Crumb
09-26-2007, 09:31 PM
:bump: Keep the votes coming. :pleased:

beyelzu
09-26-2007, 11:47 PM
i likes the patrick henry one cuz well, give me liberty or give me death is an awesome thing for someone who kept his wife chained up

its like the whole, those who most loudly clamor for liberty are least likely to give it thing

Dingfod
09-27-2007, 12:25 AM
Bra-vo!
:homer:

curses
09-27-2007, 01:15 AM
Those were good, almost too good. :narrow:

:giggle:

My vote's in as well.

Plant Woman
09-27-2007, 08:59 AM
I voted too.

Sock Puppet
09-27-2007, 02:10 PM
I voted. Didn't even throw my own a vote 'cause I know it sucked.

Shelli
09-27-2007, 04:15 PM
Unless we get a frenzy of votes soon, it looks like Limerick IX is gonna take the title for the Bestest Pre-WWII History Limerick! :cheer:

Crumb
09-27-2007, 04:19 PM
Limerick I and VII still have an outside chance.

Shelli
09-27-2007, 04:24 PM
Yep.. so c'mon voters! :larrybounce:

Shelli
09-28-2007, 02:03 PM
Let your voice be heard! Vote!
:unclesam:

(I so love ballooning. :giggle:)

livius drusus
09-28-2007, 02:13 PM
Go IX, go! :cheer:

Ensign Steve
09-28-2007, 03:02 PM
Why do you favor IX? Did you write it?

VII is running a close 2nd!

Shelli
09-28-2007, 03:44 PM
Oooh.. it could be at least a tie yet! :excited:

ceptimus
09-28-2007, 05:48 PM
IX was the one that scanned best, and the only one I voted for, and it's the winnah! :P

ITSOZAZ
09-28-2007, 05:51 PM
i don't know the story of the person in nine...who is that figure or what event is it referring to (just the mayflower)? good limerick, but who's the lass?

maddog
09-28-2007, 05:51 PM
IX was not particularly historical. It's just a sexual joke. Didn't really engage the premise, imo.

#1298

ITSOZAZ
09-28-2007, 05:54 PM
i think i should have stuck with my original fav, but i went with crumb's fav over it...granted, the one he liked is getting more votes than my other one, but speaking as a guy that loves writing limericks- the serb one is much better!

this was my other one...

There once was a man, Mr. Dole
Who wanted an island he found growing gold
But its queen stood in his way
And for that she would pay
For the pineapple filling my bowl.

Ensign Steve
09-28-2007, 06:15 PM
I think the emPHAsis is on the wrong sylLABle on "Mayflower", as well, as long as we're getting picky.

livius drusus
09-28-2007, 06:19 PM
Why do you favor IX? Did you write it?
Nopes. I didn't have an entry this round. I voted for IX and V because the rhymes were unexpected, witty and scanned right. Since IX is in the one in the lead, I'm putting my :cheer: behind it.

IX was not particularly historical. It's just a sexual joke. Didn't really engage the premise, imo.
It's both historical and sexual, imo. It's a reference to the Mayflower pilgrims, of course, but it's also a ribald zinging of puritan morality, which is a classic limerick theme.

Crumb
09-28-2007, 07:10 PM
Here are the authors for each limerick! Congrats Clutch and ES! :cheer:

InTheServiceOfZeke I, XII
Shelli II, X
Legs III, XV
maddog IV, VI
Clutch Munny V, IX
Ensign Steve VII, XVI
Dingfod VIII, XII
Sock Puppet XI
Crumb XIV
mickthinks XVII

livius drusus
09-28-2007, 07:24 PM
Congratulations to the winnars! :trophy:

Shelli
09-28-2007, 09:27 PM
Congrats Clutch! :trophy:

Congrats Ensign! :winner:

Congrats ITSOZ! :irwinnar:

Congrats the rest of us limerickers! :medal::medal::medal::medal::medal::medal::medal:

Watser?
09-28-2007, 09:28 PM
Turnips for all :D

livius drusus
09-28-2007, 09:30 PM
:glare:

Shelli
09-28-2007, 09:32 PM
:giggle: Well, even if they were turnips, turnips are yummy so I wouldn't care. :yum:

Clutch Munny
09-28-2007, 10:48 PM
Wow, that was close. Voting three times was totally the smart thing!

Crumb
09-28-2007, 10:48 PM
:glare:

viscousmemories
09-28-2007, 10:51 PM
I missed the deadline, but at first blush I would've voted for X and XVI.

Clutch Munny
09-28-2007, 10:54 PM
Go ahead - waste your vote!

Shelli
09-28-2007, 11:01 PM
I missed the deadline, but at first blush I would've voted for X and XVI.:kiss:

Ensign Steve
09-28-2007, 11:09 PM
:yeahthat:

Shelli
09-29-2007, 02:28 AM
I will say that I almost voted for XI. I like the premise and I think it's funny, but the form isn't right so I couldn't vote for it. :sadcheer:

Crumb
09-29-2007, 02:46 AM
Which others do people think aren't correct limericks? I'd like to get a better handle on the rhythm. Is mine ok?

Shelli
09-29-2007, 03:06 AM
I thought the form was fine, Crumb; it just didn't flow for me though. :dunno:

maddog
09-29-2007, 07:34 PM
I only voted for three. Those aren't the only ones I liked -- I liked a lot more than that, but I only voted for the ones I thought were the best.

#1310

ITSOZAZ
09-29-2007, 07:37 PM
Which others do people think aren't correct limericks? I'd like to get a better handle on the rhythm. Is mine ok?

don't worry about that...let people decide by votes.

Dingfod
09-30-2007, 02:49 AM
Nevermind