A Western Gay "short story"

[Wael El-Manzalawy]

Saturday:

Jack is a gay. He enjoys sex. But it is a momentary happiness. But after that ........................He can't describe his feelings. But there's something wrong.

Sunday:

He goes to the church. It's a church for the homosexuals.

Monday:

He chats with a Muslim young man. He is very polite. He gives him a free e book about Islam.

Tuesday:

He asks himself many questions:
1- Christianity forbade homosexuality for centuries. Was all those Christians wrong and the nowadays Christians right?
2- Why does Islam forbid homosexuality?

Wednesday:

He chats with Wael again. Wael tells him that homosexuality is against nature. Animals -for example- are not homosexual.Why? Because it is against nature. If you are a gay,, you will be in clash with nature. You may feel momentary happiness, but you will always feel that there is something wrong.

Thursday:

He downloads the translation of the meanings of the Holy Quran.

Friday:

He asks Wael to chat with him everyday to explain the principles of Islam to him.

[Stormlight]

He goes to the church. It's a church for the homosexuals.

:lol:

[beyelzu]

On wednseday, Wael shows that he is pigignorant about biology. Lots of animals are homosexual, it is incredibly common. There are a wide range of reasons that homosexuality or bisexuality could and are selected for.

[beyelzu]

He goes to the church. It's a church for the homosexuals.

:lol:

DONT YOU DARE LAUGH AT MY 1ST CHURCH OF COCK-CHUGGING!!!!!!!!

[Stormlight]

On wednseday, Wael shows that he is pigignorant about biology. Lots of animals are homosexual, it is incredibly common. There are a wide range of reasons that homosexuality or bisexuality could and are selected for.

That's because those damn animals haven't read the Qu'ran. Maybe if the animals would chat with Wael?

[Watser?]

Wael tells him that homosexuality is against nature. Animals -for example- are not homosexual.Why? Because it is against nature. If you are a gay,, you will be in clash with nature.

You obviously know as little about animals as you know about gays. Animals have gay sex all the time.

Now, about things that ARE unnatural: driving a car, flying a plane, wearing glasses, typing words on a computer, you name it, people do it all the time. Do you feel that there is something wrong after you post this crap on the unnatural internets?

[beyelzu]

In a related vein, since infanticide is pretty common in the animal kingdom even among primates, I can then assume that while abortion is probably wrong and evil, stoning a new born or dumping in the garbage to leave it in the elements is aok with allah.

Thats going to be my new user title.

[256 colors]

Wael tells him that homosexuality is against nature. Animals -for example- are not homosexual.Why? Because it is against nature. If you are a gay,, you will be in clash with nature. You may feel momentary happiness, but you will always feel that there is something wrong.

Oh dear, someone has never heard of bonobos or penguins...

[beyelzu]

Homosexual behavior in animals - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Homosexual_behavior_in_animals)

[Stormlight]

Wael tells him that homosexuality is against nature. Animals -for example- are not homosexual.Why? Because it is against nature. If you are a gay,, you will be in clash with nature. You may feel momentary happiness, but you will always feel that there is something wrong.

Oh dear, someone has never heard of bonobos or penguins...

:shakepenguin:

[256 colors]

I wrote a gay short story but it isn't a Western. It isn't even really gay since both of the women were bisexual. It might not even be a short story, it's about 3500 words.

[beyelzu]

Its definitely a short story, or a penthouse forum letter.

[256 colors]

Its definitely a short story, or a penthouse forum letter.

My story came in at 4th place in an erotica contest (the prize was honor, and the other winners are published erotica writers) and I was told to submit it to Penthouse. However, it is Halloween-themed, so I will wait a little while before sending it in. I have another story (also not a Western, and not gay) that I ought to submit soon, it would probably be a better "first time" story for such publication.

ETA: I should note that I would be sending it to Penthouse Variations (http://erotica-readers.com/ERA/G/Penthouse_Variations.htm), which is a paying market. Penthouse Letters (http://www.penthouseletters.com/submitletterform.html) does not pay, in fact, they own your story after you send it in. Terms and Conditions of Submission

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[Naru]

Polite fundamentalist Muslims . . . tolerant fundamentalist Christians . . . I wish the world was more like Wael's view of it.

[Ymir's blood]

7Thars puddin in them thar hills!
:oldnag:

[Dingfod]

7Ah cain't quit you!
:oldnag:

[ChuckF]

10Allahu akbar
:oldnag:

[BrotherMan]

Monday:

He chats with a Muslim young man. He is very polite. He gives him a free e book about Islam.

Friday:

He asks Wael to chat with him everyday to explain the principles of Islam to him.

Why does Wael, the kindly Muslim, need someone to give him a book about Islam and explain its principles?

[Qingdai]

It's more like an outline, than a short story.

[Kael]

I look forward to the next installment, where another troubled youth will no doubt learn of Islam and the ways it can help him recover from the unnatural folly of being Jewish.

[Leesifer]

If you are a gay,, you will be in clash with nature.

I'm not sure I believe this. Some of those gayers are quite good with colour and design.

[Stormlight]

We should really introduce Wael to davidmabus.

[Dingfod]

If you are a gay,, you will be in clash with nature.

I'm not sure I believe this. Some of those gayers are quite good with colour and design.I'm not sure they would caught dead wearing camo though, thus the clash with nature.

[beyelzu]

You know, if you go in the jungle, make a statement! If you're going to fight, CLASH!

from robin williams when he used to be funneh

[seebs]

So, basically, Wael, you're posting fantasies about how you wish you could convert people, if only they'd be convinced by what you would tell them if you had the courage to actually tell them instead of writing fiction about how you wish you'd tell them.

You're writing material in which you reduce other humans to objects who exist only to behave in the ways that would fulfill your desires that involve them. They have no soul, no existence outside your fantasy of how you could use them to make yourself feel better.

Regular pornography at least has the justification that, underneath it all, sexual desire is a part of the animal nature we were born with. The pornography you write lacks even that redeeming characteristic, but is just as fundamentally empty.

As long as you view other humans as nothing but tools for making you feel like you're important and effective, you will be a bad apologist, and you will be far from understanding your own religion. Maybe you should try again from the top.

How do you think God wants you to treat other people? How do you think you should think about them in order to help yourself do this?

[256 colors]

We're gonna need a double-thanks button.