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Old 11-29-2015, 02:09 AM
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Default Re: The Light of Love

Have you ever read anything? Anything at all? Because your version of writing is just a list of movements. Nothing happens beyond the most basic minutiae of breathing in and breathing out. No themes are explored. There isn't a word of dialogue. I'd say it's just a compendium of stage directions but I've read far, far more compelling stage directions (shoutout to Eugene O'Neill).

Do you genuinely think this is how to write, or do you just not care that you produce unreadable, stultifying, stodge? I'm guessing it's the latter. Your narcissism makes your stench sweet in your own nostrils.
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