And, BTW, peacegirl, people here HAVE read the stuff you want them to read, and beyond. How the hell do you think we found out about the light and sight nonsense (you really need to take that out of the book) and the other stuff besides? I just reread the first couple of chapters the other night, for old time’s sake. Peacegirl, here’s a pro tip from someone who has designed and written and edited for both print and web: the type face you chose for the book is GHASTLY. I have no idea what font that is — and I have used hundred of fonts — but change it immediately. It is VERY hard to read, and reading on the web, as opposed to print, is difficult under the best of cirucumstances, especially for older people.
A good rule of thumb for print on the Web is to use a san-serif typeface. Verdana works very well for that purpose.
I worked as an editor for 18 years at the New York Times. Right now I’m doing freelance editing jobs, including a book for a photographer and another for an artist. If you want me to edit your book, PM me. Of course I charge a fee.
